Rachel Dennis:
Front Cover: I love the image that you have used. The mid close shot is perfect as it shows facial expression. Her face shows a lot of attitude and that really suits your genre of music.
Contents page: I like the layout. It reminds m of the magazine I look that which is a good things as it shows how realistic your one is.
Double spread page: The big A gives it a very professional feel. But to improve I think you should have a quote written somewhere, just above her head or something. That will help make the interview appear more interesting and make the page feel less empty.
Sahra Ibrahim:
Front Cover: The masthead is written in big writing making it easy to see and notice. I feel like there is a lot going on in the front cover which makes the picture get lost a little bit.
Contents page: The number of pictures are perfect. Having 3 would of left little space for features.
Double spread page: The fact that the colour scheme is going to match is good at the pages will feel like a proper magazine. I like the three columns. It lets you write a long and interesting interview.
Huda Khan:
Front Cover: The actual drawing isn't that good, you could of made it more detailed but I can see the main features well. its good that you linked the necklace to he pull quote. it gives the magazine a very real touch.
Contents page: The top tracks section is creative. It adds excitement to what can be a very boring page.
Double spread page: I get you are going for a set colour scheme but it would be nice to have a pop of colour.
Petra B:
Front Cover: The artists name and story should be more separate from the other cover lines.
Contents page: Looks great. Maybe have less features.
Double spread page: I like that the text goes on 2 pages, it make it less structured which connects with a pop genre
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